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Monday, 2 September 2019

cats



Hi my name is India.

Cats are so cute! I think you should get one. Let me tell you why.

Firstly, have you ever been cold at night?  Well if  you had a cat you would always be toasty warm .

My friend Olivia Martelli has one cat and one kitten, I have played with them at her house, it was so cuddly. Now I want a cat but my mum and dad say no. Bella ede has a cat and she says they make great pets.

A lion is another kind of cat. It is a big cat. Some people think they would be scary but I think that all cats are so cute.

Cats are so much better than dogs. Apparently scientists say having one will make men more attractive to women! You will also  sleep better.

Now you know why I want a cat. They are cute and fun to play with. Letś hope Mum and Dad are listening!

Thank you four listening.







3 comments:

  1. Hello India I like that you have put in why and because in your paragraphs I also like that you have used interesting words about the cats.You could include some images maybe but any way how did you make your cats slide

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  2. Hello. I like how you talked about why you liked them. Next time, you could remember not to submit anyones last names because the whole world can see it and that includes bad guys. Even donald trump can see it. Goodbye, your brother Max.

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