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Tuesday, 30 June 2020

writing!!!

                                                     Hi bloggers .
Today I am going to tall you about my writing. We have been making a story for writing. My story is about my brother getting a shark bite. The stories we have been making is a narrative story which is a made up story. It took 4 days to plan it and then write down. My story is called The big shark attack. I hope you like my story. It was fun to make a story.
Do you like part 2 of my story

2 comments:

  1. Cool story India Poor Max! Sounds painful to get his legs bitten off by a shark! And then no arms too!

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